Raid #21

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Claire Lovelace has been removed from the Raid for not posting within four days.

Lenne is next to post in the thread. She has four days.

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The Staff is Reviewing this Raid!

The battle is over!

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After some voting, we have decided that Light has won this battle.


The Light has won - World of Balance/Ruin!


Since General Beatrix, Celes and Lenne have won, they are awarded 150 munny that will be automatically added to your accounts for use in the Ability/Equipment Upgrade Shop. Congrats!

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Reviews

Review #1

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Facts|Style|Sportsmanship

System

Facts:

FACT! We never get to see any damage really being done successfully thus far. Sure, Claire the place on fire, but only Beatrix got to post a second time before people... started to have being vanished. If we go by facts, Xemnas did attack Celes and Swift tossed some protection for his team, but Beatrix tossed more things around and so by facts and the people that have vanished, it stays with this... However, I feel this raid needed to go on further... - [Light]

Style:

What's there to say? It started out all normal (well, some things aren't every day stuff, but eh). The Dark stood ready to attack and the Light calmly responded. Maybe the Dark could be set at the front due to Claire, Pete, Xemnas, and Swift all having cooperatedly stood ready and Xemnas and Swift stood up to help Claire and Pete in a sense when Celes appeared. Beatrix did most for combat, though... Still, this section would remain the same for me. - [Dark]

Sportsmanship:

What is there really to say? Nobody really truly got hit thus far or anything, but with all the happenings and how Celes and Beatrix responded to the scene that unfolded, as Celes didn't know who started the fire in all certainty and Beatrix responded truthfully on the happenings that followed. I'm guessing this would stick to this. But truly... this thread hasn't even really started yet as a raid. ._.;; - [Light]

Light Team

Review #2

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System

Facts:

The only damage done I’ve seen was pretty much on that house that was set on fire.

Yes, Xemnas and Beatrix had already launched their attacks but the raid itself didn’t last long enough for the opponents to react to those techniques/attacks used. Swift certainly helped his side with giving his side the magical/physical defense buff spell. Celes was already in position to start a fight and Pete had his bomb hiding behind his back.

It certainly didn’t help that people began to forget to post within their time slot in the raid and vanished as a result. This raid definitely needed to last a bit longer to see anything more definite =.= -
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Style:

Okay, the Dark was good on trying to stir up trouble the by burning the village down [at least from Nihlus’ and Claire’s perspectives] before Celes began to blame Claire and Pete who had just walked in on the scene and was wondering who started the fire. I admit that out of all the entrances that I’ve read, Pete’s was the most fun to read and the hiding the bomb behind his back was a nice touch to his character. I agree that Beatrix began to do the combat and Xemnas and Swift reacted accordingly.

But there wasn’t enough action and that was in part thanks to the inactivity that happened right near the end of the thread plus those who missed their turn. It’s safe to say that the Dark controlled this fight. - [Dark]

Sportsmanship:

I applaud both sides of this raid for mentioning the cold and their effects [or non-effects] in the snowy environment. It’s actually quite easy to forget to remember to add in the effects of the environment on your character and Claire should have dressed a bit better for the weather.

Otherwise, there really isn’t that much to work with. This raid is mainly a response to the scene/situation Nihlus and Claire began as well as the dark defending against Celes’ [There really was no way she could have known who started the fire since she had only arrived at the scene.] and Beatrix’s response and switching over to attack mode. - [Light]

Overall Winner
Light